My alien name is call Bob he has one eye on it face. he has got green skin on his body. Bob the alien walks like a mouse. He likes to eat earth bugs. The alien has 6 pieces of hair on his head. He has fat tummy like a big bear. His feet looks like a green wiggly jelly and this alien has only has 4 fingers. Bob is shaped like an oval.
Kia Ora, it's me Helisa, your next door neighbor in School. First, i'd just like to say how a wonderful peice of writing this is. But, there wasone thing, i'd recommend for next time you post something up like this. One thing i'd consider is for you to proof read and edit before you post something to your blog. There were a few errors in your writing, but who doesn't make mistakes. There is always a next time. Great work, keep it up !
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hi love your writing byyyee
ReplyDeleteHi terry I like your writing maybe next time you can try and make your writing smaller
ReplyDeletegreat job from Roscoe at ahipara school.